Roundtable Discussion 2…

Egyptian youth at a modern workshop.
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Today we sat down and discussed how our ideas were developing. I told everyone my idea and that the 1st draft was nearly complete as well as having done some ruff storyboard ideas, plus a bit of the translations with my Dad the day before. Everybody agreed that it would be better if the bus was stationary i.e. it wasn’t moving, I completely agreed because continuity was one of the things I was worried about. Phil suggested having the bus broken down as part of the story which I really liked, but also Jamie thought it’d be best to take out the conversion with the group of Egyptians and just have him overhearing them. I do like this idea but I also like the idea of him talking to them because there’s nothing to do on the bus, from me its a hard choice. Either way I will have to do a 2nd draft of my script.

Published in: on January 27, 2011 at 3:24 pm  Leave a Comment  

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